Paper 1"Foreign Athletic Limits"
Grade: C -Explanation: The grammar is poor throughout the paper. Run on sentences and lack of clarity. Seems to be very bias toward foreign athletes and how they are receiving the scholarships.
Paper 2
"Online College vs Online High School"
Grade: D
Explanation: There is a mistake in the first paragraph which distracts immediately. Commas are not used properly. Spelling and punctuation are weak. Conclusion is not strong.
Paper 3:
"Predisposed Divorce"
Grade: B-
Explanation: Too many question proposed to the reader. Again run-on sentences and weak punctuation. Citations were poor. But overall paper was well written
Paper 4:
"NAACP Case Against Gun Manufactures"
Grade: BExplanation: Spelling and grammar are poor. A lot of minor mistakes. Anyway needs to be changed to any way. Minor spelling errors. Just a lack of attention.
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